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Model: Teo Dora
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:iconaltuna111:
altuna111 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Preciosa....Love Love Love Love Love Airborne Airborne Airborne 
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shutter-fox Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Professional Photographer
That's absolutely mesmerizing. Good job, mate! :]

~f/d.c
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:icongrodpro:
grodpro Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Professional Photographer
Excellent!
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Blue-Cherub Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Shared your wonderful work on my personal blog:

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If you wish for me to take it down, let me know and I will do so immediately!
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:iconoreokitty1:
OreoKitty1 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013   Photographer
love it!!
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:icontrystortreat:
TrystOrTreat Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Lovely.
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:iconcosaco:
Cosaco Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Lovely :love:
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:iconguilinphotography:
GuilinPhotography Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Professional Photographer
I love the composition
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:iconhosamir:
HOSAMIR Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
nice
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:iconemohgfx:
EmOhGFX Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Photographer
Love this!
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:iconazumi14:
Azumi14 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
It's soooo cute^^ the dress is beautiful
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:iconbeartrain:
beartrain Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
Very nice color scheme. The position of the legs helps with the innocent look.
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:iconblackprefection:
Blackprefection Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
your Artwork have been featured in the Wow Feature collection

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:iconkes-rozy:
kes-rozy Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
<3 amazing
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:iconfilipamonteiro:
filipamonteiro Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Professional Photographer
Cutie ^_^
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:iconmalaugusto:
malaugusto Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012   Photographer
This lovely work has been featured here: People and Portraits Spotlight Vol. 20.
Looking forward to seeing more art from you at #devPREMIUM!

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:iconmadsubstance:
MadSubstance Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Feature! [link] :heart:
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:iconidaniphotography:
idaniphotography Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Professional Photographer
:bow:
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honeybabyboi Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Some of your best compositions are centered. This one's a little quirky. It suggests motion where the others (Pink, Chronicle of a Death Foretold) suggest stillness.

You have a marvellous sense of color. The colors in your photos are vivid, but often just a little on the dark side, as with the yellow dress in The Long Journey Home. Here the green ribbon is deeply intriguing, the center of the mystery, if you will, but not quite the dead center. In another photo from this session, the green seems a little bit brighter. The darkness, then, would appear to be a theme with this photo in particular.

The depth of field, since it's been pointed out, might be regarded as imperfect. On the other hand, given the surrealistic theme of the piece, the sense that this image is emerging from a shadowy nether world is probably aided by your choice of f-stop. For my tastes, there's something perfectly ominous about the shadow in the doorway behind Miss Dora.

The craziness of the upside balloon that's not quite a balloon and the string that's actually cord to some hidden appliance almost speaks for itself. It doesn't really, though. In another context it might look 100 times less interesting. The artistry that you've put into the realization of this image is tremendous.

There's a metaphorical connection between the green bow and the knot of the balloon, and also evidently a prominent disconnect. The snipping of the umbilical chord symbolizes the beginning of life. In a sense, too, it's a mark of mortality and separation. If the plug in the photo functions as a kind of punctum, how do we interpret what's beneath the green bow? An oneiric language of dreams, phantasmagoria and adumbrations....

What is is that we long for when we long for a return to innocence? For me the question has no easy answer. In this photo we're invited to share in a spirit of play. It's not real, not even the balloon is real. No harm will come of it. And yet the darkness of that green bow makes me wonder. What is it really saying?
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popandroid Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
WOW, amazing:D
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:iconcoruskating:
coruskating Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
Crisp and lovely shot, surely meeting the category!
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:iconmrmd53:
mrmd53 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful!!:XD:
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johnnyhec Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I would have chosen more depth of field, and try to avoid de shadow on the grey wall in the back.
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:iconidaniphotography:
idaniphotography Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Professional Photographer
what f. stop would you have used?
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:iconjohnnyhec:
johnnyhec Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
as much as the light would allow me, it depends on how much light power you have, it's just that the balloon over her head and the blue wall look a little out of focus without creating a real "bokeh", i think the texture of the wall, and the shape and reflex of the light in the "balloon" are more interesting if you include them in the first plane, but it is a matter of personal taste, other than that, the picture is BEAUTIFUL
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:iconidaniphotography:
idaniphotography Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Professional Photographer
That's shot at f.2
real bokeh on something as far as 30cm from the focus point? good luck with that, you will need a heck of a lens!
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johnnyhec Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I can tell you used an open diaphragm, that's what I meant, i didn't mean to upset you, all I'm saying (since you asked for critique), is that I would prefer to have the same level of sharpness on the blue back wall and on the lamp on the top, that's all, thank you for sharing
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lucrezetta Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
I love the concept! Perfect colours and contrasts!
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:icongingado:
gingado Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Great work...:clap:
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:iconthandav:
thandav Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Professional General Artist
I love this shot ,cool beautiful model nice concept,
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:iconlitlmomma:
LitlMomma Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Really feelin' this! Wonderful job!
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:iconn-l-e:
n-l-e Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
great
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:iconwerwin:
werwin Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist
AMAZING!!! so fresh!
Beautiful image
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arteater1 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
If only a girl....a real live girl would actually look anything like this. This is fantasy stuff today, and it used to be the way woman sometimes actually dressed. It's so ad what losers we've become to have the gifts to this world that are woman...dress in jeans, t-shirts and sweat-shirts and top it off with limited personnel hygiene anymore...pathetic....just pathetic.
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rmonroe041 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Wow, this is a really, really, nice pic!!!
Awesome, awesome job!
Just...., WOW!
(the 'upside down' balloon lamp was a nice touch!)
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:iconnh0ctyler:
Nh0cTyler Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this's mah workart [link] :D thanks for your photo
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:iconh20212:
h20212 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
very nice work
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:iconreallywannaknow:
reallywannaknow Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful :)
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Mehdy-Photography Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
canon eos 7D ?
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:iconawesum74:
Awesum74 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Soo cute!! She's beautiful!!
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Melody-in-the-Air Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh I love it~! <3
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KeirTanaka Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
[link] - Pure Moods
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:iconlizardhr:
lizardhr Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
beautiful!
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:iconno-day-but-2day:
no-day-but-2day Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I personally think less make up would look a little better but very nice. Either way she looks young and pure.
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DeadlyIlluminati Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
I like how everything fits in together
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pablour026 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
love the concept and settings of the shoot. amazing work
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:iconstardustshimmy:
StardustShimmy Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Nice pose.
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kittycatcupcakes Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
this is interesting. the cord as a balloon string is cool and so is the upside down balloon
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AprilElizabeth Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
wow, really neat! i love the colors! Great model and everything.
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