The image is interesting, love the splash of colour, with red shoes and red hear, and a lovery model.
To me the images still looks flat dispite good use of available lighting and lots of shadows. Im not sure why it didnt pop for me, perhaps it would look better in larger size. or from different angles. If you could let me know what any others in this series looked like?
Nothing specific stands out wrong, im confused, it has all the elements i would love, but im not over-amazed, considering your one of my favs, consistantly producing amazing images.
Love the sign, little contrived, but it really added to this image.