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you asked for a critique but I don't have a "premium membership" so I'll just write what I see here.
Having the bowtie line up with the stairway really cuts the photo in half. The upper half has so much going on (many areas of high contrast and detail) where as the bottom is made of four vertical planes of color. This cuts the photo in a way that keeps the two halves from relating with each other.
i admire your work b/c, (obviously) she is nude... BUT the work is not "sexual" in a perverse or un needed way. it shows the beautiy of naked flesh with out parading it around, if that makes sense. ya its right there in your face but its so soft and gentle.... you, and your model are truly "artistic nudes"
I have trie4d with many other artists to leave critiques and the critique`ing software inside DA's server must have bugs as in 9 tries to write a critique for this artist or that ..only one got through..So here is what I wrote....and I gave it all 4.5 to 5.0 on the stars rating...I am sorry the critique system keeps saying erri no loki and wont post mark
so here is what I wished to convey
This has a wonderful concept , as well as multi-dimensionality, which not only goes from the 2 dimensional screen as wee see it on our computers, but, into the 3 dimensional as well, with the use of the mixed media of photography, and line / sketch / charcoal graphic, all of which catapult this image from the sublime to the divine, and hence into the 4th dimensional paradigm of evolutionary art. The lighting and crop in the actual photographic portion of the image are excellent. The placement of the sketched graphic is wonderful and brings to whole image to a very balanced finished piece. This to me is done very well, and I give it all high marks